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Cheeks wrote

Maybe change out the 3rd question to be more broad and inclusive?

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sudo wrote

I would change "probably an anarchist" to "might be an anarchist". Suggesting an ideology to someone is better than telling them they are that ideology.

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Cheeks wrote

I miss David Graeber. He was publishing a decent amount for few years and now he is kinda just seems to be doing his London school of econ thing.

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selver wrote

His new book just came out a couple days ago, and Utopia of Rules came out 3 years ago. That's not enough output? Or is it that you don't like what he's doing now?

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buzz wrote (edited )

here are things i would try doing:

as this message is for prospective anarchists, who aren't anarchists, you would want to prioritise that, hence I would move the text 'do you think that' component to this top. I would try deemphasing the 'Are you an Anarchist?' because that might scare people away lol, and instead a "you might be an anarchist" text will allow for more questioning.

Since this looks highly regional, I would remove the afa and ancom flags, reposition the bsn logo to the right and make it larger. since there isnt any red in the image anymore, I might make the de-emphaised 'are you an anarchist' text orange to bring everything together.

Finally, I would probably make the anarchistfaq.org text consistant with the 'you might be' text, larger than than the body. also would consider not linking to an unsecure and poorly designed website.

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ziq wrote

Under the title I might put a row of worker's faces.

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Tequila_Wolf wrote

What do workers look like? I'm not a big fan of workerism, not least because huge proportions of people in the countries around me who are poor just don't have jobs.

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ziq wrote (edited )

I assumed the target audience would be big city folk because of the Australian Brisbane Solidarity logo. So photos of regular working stiffs they can relate to would be a good approach. But workers don't look different from anyone else, it'd just be photos of exhausted lookin ppl.