Also, on a personal level, I'd rather you found a different term than 'Green Anarchist' for the final section. Green Anarchist is an umbrella term for many different schools of thought including Post-Scarcity Anarchism, so it's kind of exclusionary to use that term in your critique

Green anarchy has always meant 'anticiv anarchist' so I don't think it's exclusionary to use the term just because social ecologists have recently decided to appropriate it. It would be easier if you just used the term 'eco-anarchist' so people aren't confused by adherents of destructive industrial ideologies calling themselves 'green'. There are no green factories.

I don't think it's fair to both dismiss Communalism as authoritarian and complain about Bookchin dismissing anarcho-primitivism as authoritarian.

There's a clear history of Bookchin being attracted to authoritarianism - after all, he was a tankie for much of his life and provided ample fuel to future generations of tankies with his anti-anarchist "lifestylism" screeds that are now parroted verbatim on tankie forums. Anarcho-primitivism doesn't have that legacy. I also documented his descent back into something resembling authoritarian ideology with his own quotes, culminating with this:

The minority must have patience and allow a majority decision to be put into practice... Municipal minorities [must] defer to the majority wishes of participating communities.