Revolt and Survive... Or Die

Submitted by JayGrym in Poetry (edited )

We gotta get tribal

To ensure our survival

No more machines

We gotta rewild

Our species degenerated

We think we're educated

But we got clipped wings

Because we're domesticated

Revolt or kill your kids

The world we leave is this

Didn't get it til my teens

So raise your fist

Solidarity for the People

To fight the evil

To fight the greed fiends

Or be slaughtered like the sheep will



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JayGrym OP wrote

Damn, I got downvoted and didn't get any feedback so I don't know why they didn't like it lol


ziq wrote (edited )

A lot of people have a distinct dislike for anticiv stuff. But you might have gotten downvoted because of the css on this sub. It's broken af. Also:

Revolt or kill your kids

I know you mean if we don't revolt our kids will die of climate change, but I'm guessing anti-civ haters might think you mean kill your kids so there are less people in the world to use up resources.


JayGrym OP wrote (edited )

Great insight. I hadn't considered that line of thought. That particular line actually was meant to be somewhat of a merciful line; dying of climate change will not be painless or quick but slow and painful. Thanks for the clarification and input. I wrote this in like five minutes and was listening to Dead Prez lol oh and I don't know of any other realistic ways than anticiv to save our planet. Everything else seems like it's too little too late. If there is one, I'd like to know about it for sure!