It feels a little "shy", have you tried lowering the drums a little and making the melody a little louder? Maybe add a little more volume range everywhere for the important parts to really pop out?
I really like around 0:40 with the fade in and the melody and the voice :)
Appreciate you taking the time! It's rough to get a fresh pair of ears these days :)
My tendency is to completely overdo the low-end and the kick at first (old habits die hard -- here's the first version), which causes all kinds of issues later. I'll come back to it later, with your suggestion in mind.
moonlune wrote
It feels a little "shy", have you tried lowering the drums a little and making the melody a little louder? Maybe add a little more volume range everywhere for the important parts to really pop out?
I really like around 0:40 with the fade in and the melody and the voice :)